Feedback from pitch

• Detailed and clear synopsis

• Intriguing plot

• In depth about your plot, know what you need to do and want

• Good presentation of the shots you'll be doing

• Very good combination of the logo and music

• Good use of camera work

• Like the suitcase idea; gives tension for the rest of the film. Audience will question what is in them.

• Good idea of locations and props like the jewellry and suitcases.

• Need to show more of how you came up with the ideas of your camera work and shots

From this feedback it seems that the idea of following the meeting of two groups based around two suitcases was well received so we will continue to base our opening sequence on this idea.